Oh yeah, in the third bullet for Terrascale, "Installed" shouldn't be capitalized. "Kernel" and "User" technically shouldn't either, but they both look fine as-is so you could probably get away with leaving them.
This is the level of pickiness you've reduced me to. Well done.
That level of pickiness is appreciated. I'm also claiming to know something about technical writing, and so I should damn well make sure my punctuation, etc is without flaw.
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Date: 2005-06-28 04:16 am (UTC)This is the level of pickiness you've reduced me to. Well done.
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Date: 2005-06-28 04:51 am (UTC)